Week 2 Assignment 1 and Re Visions

So today I got my first ECritique, and man what a difference the feedback makes. I dunno if it looks any better but I sure like it a lot more.

This is what I turned in for the first assignment. We were to go out and sketch people, it could be any where, I went to Starbucks. A lot of the poses were the same, but I liked this one of a woman pointing at the menu board.




This is the Re Vision, I like it much better!




-Nick